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Kelapa Lilin XI Rd

Blok N1 : 10/11

Kelapa Gading

Jakarta 14240

July 28th, 2008

IOC office

McDonald Street

New York 14540

Dear Sir,

I read your promotion about free trip to the next Olympics in Beijing, China on the Jakarta Post July 25th, and I was really interested in it. I would like to see the Olympic torch and also the games and support it.

I was a journalist in Kompas, and I really need to see the Olympic game. And I will make some report about the games, the athletes, etc. After that, I put in on the internet and some newspaper in Indonesia. So, for people who do not come, can enjoy it too. They can know more about Olympic, and support the athletes.

Besides that, I really interest with wonderful Beijing. I have an aim to go there since I was child. I never have this special chance. So, I will really glad if you can bring my dream into reality through this free trip. I am also one of the committee for Olympics 2008. I would like to know more about Olympic Games so that the next Olympic can be better.

It is an urge, but I could not afford my trip to China. Because my family has just bought a new house and I have spent much money for it. So I would be really happy if I could go there with your help.

I would like to express my gratitude to you and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. You could send me the result to my email, phonie_linez@yahoo.co.id or my mobile phone on +6281808081818

Faithfully yours,

Vonny Caroline

City A, B, or C??

Comparing city A, B, and C, I like city B the most. Because the Olympic Games will be held on July, the climate there is cool. So, it will be so comfortable. It has 22^oC as the maximum temperature and rarely rain drops. So, the games will be done well.

17 stadiums were available, each station has capacity 140,000, and 2 stadiums were planned to be built with capacity 165,000 and be completed in 2010. This condition supports the Olympics Games which is the International Games, because many people come from other countries.

This city also provides many accommodations. As we know, many tourists come, and they need hotel to stay. So, the facility of accommodation is important and needed.In the past, the liberators movement caused difficulties. But now, the government guarantees that the security is under control. So, we can trust that the Olympic Games will be done successfully.